Paragraph 2: Example
Look at the following example paragraph and answer the following questions:
1. What is the controlling idea of the topic sentence?
2. How many general ideas are developed in the explanations before the paraphrase?
a. Summarize the meaning of the explanations before the paraphrase.
3. Is the example relevant? Why?
4. Does the meaning of the paraphrase match the explanation before it? How?
a. Is the paraphrase introduced correctly? Why?
b. Is the paraphrase format correct?
c. Is the paraphrase convincing proof of the general idea?
5. Is the paraphrase reconnected to the explanation?
Belonging to a peer group is necessary for growing children. The reason why it is
important is that they can train themselves to be a socialized member of a group. A process
of socializing is kind of like dealing with a math problem. It requires repetition of facing
various people. For example, when I was in middle school, I and a few friends formed a
group and we usually got along together. However, we sometimes crashed against each other
because everybody had different characteristics. Even if I repeated a quarrel with them a lot
and that made me painful, I've never regretted that. Through the experiences, I and my friends
have finally got better at understanding and considering others' feelings. In other words, after
the repetition, I have gained know-how to mix myself among a group wherever I go. Brooks
(2011) asserted that to be a part of well-organized group, you have to notice the atmosphere,
read the context and tell apart to-do and not to-do. Those skills are not easily or naturally
obtained. By belonging to a group, they need to learn how to be social.
Correct the following grammar errors:
While learning an individual skill like playing music, drawing,..usually need a
certain time of practice to build the habit
According to Brooks (2011), mentions when children work in a group, they are successful…
We have to work as a group so many times, and we couldn’t avoid it so that it is
very important to become a good group member.
Teamwork helps children social with other people.
Participate in the team is easier and accomplish tasks much faster rather than and solve the
problem alone.
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