first sentence not exciting but its clear
(1) you just have to explain why ?
(2) How many general explanation
(3)
He has played soccer since 1993 at a very young age .
Before
career :
was
35
could not play
explanation is not clear
you don't make the explanation very clear
,present grammar mistake
Bullied by somebody
such as bullying and ridiculed
being bullied
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