Paragraph 1: Revision Practice

• Due Feb 1 by 11:59pm
 
• Points 10
 
• Submitting a file upload
 
• Available Jan 26 at 12am - Feb 1 at 11:59pm 7 days

This assignment was locked Feb 1 at 11:59pm.

Choose 1 to 2 content comments from your paper and revise them according to my comments. Use the following format to organize your revision:

1. Original: Copy and paste the original section of your paragraph.

2. Feedback: Copy and past my comment under that.

3. Revision: Write your revision.

Or, choose 3-4 grammar errors I commented on and use the following format to revise them:

1. Original: Copy and paste the original grammar error so that I can see the mistake clearly.

2. Correction: Correct the error.

3. Explain: Write an explanation of what the mistake was and how you corrected it.