Tuesday, November 30, 2021

Revision of WA2




 Revise WA #2 (Social Networking) 

You need to revise both paragraphs of Writing Assignment #2 and turn the revision in on Canvas. Read the comments that I made in the rubric and also look at the notes that I made next to the paragraphs in the margin.

In your revision you need to:

1.  Correct any grammar mistakes that I pointed out.  Highlight the corrections in blue.

2.  Take away any detail that is off topic.  You should delete the detail.  (instead of crossing it out)

3.  Add extra support as needed. Highlight the extra support in green. 

***Be sure that you highlight the changes that you make. If you do not highlight the changes, I will not grade the revision, so you will not get credit for it. 


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